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What you'll learn
The aim of this diploma is to provide you with skills that will help you succeed at university.
By the end of the programme, you'll be able to hold a basic conversation in Māori and observe and take part in marae customs at Victoria's Te Herenga Waka Marae, on Kelburn campus. In the Waiata Performance course you'll study and explore several waiata in depth.

Scholarships are awarded to hundreds of first year students each year. They help with tuition fees, and with accommodation costs at Victoria's halls of residence. There are also a number of scholarships and awards targeted at Māori students which can help you fund your studies.

In Important information under the requirements

• If you already have the required study skills you may be able to replace MAOR 003 with another MAOR course. Seek advice from Te Kawa a Māui / School of Māori Studies.
• Once you have completed the Tohu Māoritanga you will be able to enrol in a Bachelor's degree. If you decide to do a Bachelor of Arts you may be able to cross-credit up to 60 points from your Tohu Māoritanga qualification.
• The academic Calendar is the authoritative source of programme and course information. If you have any questions, talk to a Māori Liaison Officer.

Note that the link should be from the full 'Māori Liaison Officer' but to the same url as for Liaison Officer only (as on all other qualifications).

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Once you have completed the Tohu Māoritanga you will be able to enrol in a Bachelor's degree. If you decide to do a Bachelor of Arts you may be able to cross-credit up to 60 points from your Tohu Māoritanga qualification.

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Personal statement