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We now have the new XXXX pages drafted for you to review. I have attached a pdf of these and shortly I will send you an invitation to GatherContent our GatherContent—our online review system.
This draft is based on our meeting with you and your existing recruitment content. We have expertise in web marketing writing but not in your subject. We need your help to get the subject matter right and ensure we are hitting the key drivers for this group of prospective students. The new pages have been tightly written for mobile readers, with a focus on the students’ needs in mind. This includes ensuring the content can be understood without needing to know our internal systems or academic language. It would be great if you could keep this in mind during your review.
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Date | Step | Who | Timing |
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XXXX | Content supplied for review | WIP2 | Date sent |
XXXX | Initial feedback and all content | XXX | 1 week |
XXXX | Integrate changes | WIP2, in consultation | 3 days |
XXXX |
Load page, supply page for review | WIP2 | 1 week | |
XXXX | Final feedback | XXXX | 3 days |
XXXX | Finalise content | WIP2, in consultation | 2 days |
XXXX | Send to proofreader | WIP2 | 1 week |
XXXX (tbc) | New content deployed | WIP2 | 1 week |
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