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Avoid mini-word clusters (lots of very small words in close proximity - eg: The firms they compete with, supply, or buy from may not be just in New Zealand - but overseas as well).)

Avoid jargon

Think how Google Translate may deal with the text (eg, 'Foundation studies' - is that about building?)

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